My first attempt at a book trailer.
A bit longer than most book trailers, but I like it. Rather dramatic.
Thank God for LBJ's 1964 fear-mongering ads against Barry Goldwater. I've used the infamous Daisy Ad and the War on Poverty Ad to highlight the book trailer.
I enjoyed putting it together. It took about four different versions before I settled on this one.
One interesting side effect of making the book trailer is that the process of creating a visual interpretation of my story has inspired me to keep going and even generated new ideas and new enthusiasm for the tale.
I'm sure a professional book trailer maker could do a more precise and shorter version, but I still like this first attempt.
Now, back to writing the tale!
Be well.
See you on the bookshelf.
Larry Mike
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20 September 2010
17 September 2010
Laynie NEVЯLAND Code Solved: 2 Prizes Left!
NEVЯLANDer Teresa R. has solved the code Laynie uses in the sub-headings to tell her story.
She gets the one-of-a-kind NEVЯLAND Stein.
Several others are close but not quite there yet.
I'm still waiting for the second and third NEVЯLANDers to solve Laynie's code.
The second NEVЯLANDer to solve the code will a receive nifty one-of-a-kind signed NEVЯLAND t-shirt.
The third NEVЯLANDer to solve the code will receive a nifty one-of-a-kind signed NEVЯLAND mouse pad.
I'll post pics of the mouse pad and t-shirt soon.
You can join the NEVЯLAND Facebook Group by ticking HERE.
I appreciate those of you who have taken an interest in this.
Remember, TWO MORE PRIZES are offered--so don't give up!
See you on the bookshelf!
Be well,
Larry Mike
Several others are close but not quite there yet.
I'm still waiting for the second and third NEVЯLANDers to solve Laynie's code.
The second NEVЯLANDer to solve the code will a receive nifty one-of-a-kind signed NEVЯLAND t-shirt.
The third NEVЯLANDer to solve the code will receive a nifty one-of-a-kind signed NEVЯLAND mouse pad.
I'll post pics of the mouse pad and t-shirt soon.
You can join the NEVЯLAND Facebook Group by ticking HERE.
I appreciate those of you who have taken an interest in this.
Remember, TWO MORE PRIZES are offered--so don't give up!
See you on the bookshelf!
Be well,
Larry Mike
15 September 2010
13 September 2010
12 September 2010
OpenOffice.org Suite: A Convert Explains His Conversion
I'm a recent convert to OpenOffice.org's suite of office programs. I'm slowly weaning myself off any and all Microsoft Office programs, and this includes PowerPoint and Excel.
Read the rest of the blog at LarryMikeGarmon.com
Read the rest of the blog at LarryMikeGarmon.com
06 September 2010
New Post at LarryMikeGarmon.com; Chap 03 on Scribd.com
Dear Curious Reader,
As I have previously stated, I have simplified my life by combining my website, Talewright blog, and NEVЯLAND blog into one.
I've turned my website into a WordPress blog.
My life is so much simpler now.
Tick the image or my name to be taken there: LarryMikeGarmon.com
You can subscribe from there.
The new web/WordPress site also contains NEVЯLAND news and excerpts.
New NEVЯLAND Website Look:

I've added a second Theme Song as well: "Chirpy Chirpy Cheep Cheep". This is really a creepy song about a boy (Baby Don) who goes to sleep hearing his mother singing a song and then awakens the next day to find both Momma and Poppa are gone "far, far away". The reason it's creepy for me is because it's such an upbeat, happy song for such a terrifying situation, especially for a child!
NEVЯLAND Excerpts:
I'm posting NEVЯLAND excepts on my website and also through Scribd.com.
Just go to LarryMikeGarmon.com and you'll see the excerpt posting in the middle column labeled Recent Musings.
Tick HERE for the Scribd.com version.
Hope you and those for whom you care and love are happy and healthy.
See you the bookshelves.
Larry Mike
As I have previously stated, I have simplified my life by combining my website, Talewright blog, and NEVЯLAND blog into one.
My life is so much simpler now.
Tick the image or my name to be taken there: LarryMikeGarmon.com
You can subscribe from there.
The new web/WordPress site also contains NEVЯLAND news and excerpts.
New NEVЯLAND Website Look:
I've added a second Theme Song as well: "Chirpy Chirpy Cheep Cheep". This is really a creepy song about a boy (Baby Don) who goes to sleep hearing his mother singing a song and then awakens the next day to find both Momma and Poppa are gone "far, far away". The reason it's creepy for me is because it's such an upbeat, happy song for such a terrifying situation, especially for a child!
NEVЯLAND Excerpts:
I'm posting NEVЯLAND excepts on my website and also through Scribd.com.
Just go to LarryMikeGarmon.com and you'll see the excerpt posting in the middle column labeled Recent Musings.
Tick HERE for the Scribd.com version.
Hope you and those for whom you care and love are happy and healthy.
See you the bookshelves.
Larry Mike
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15 August 2010
If I Weren't Crazy, I'd Go Insane
I'm running naked across the soccer field during the World Cup in front of God and everybody.
Am I crazy to do this? Of course I am.
But, I'm having fun, learning much, seeing Story from a different perspective, and enjoying the community of readers and writers in an organic writing and telling of Story!
One reason I'm doing this is because I live in the boonies and don't have a regular writers support group.
Another reason I'm doing this is because I still have yet to find a critique partner or two with whom he/she and I can be consistent and faithful in responding to and evaluating our respective stories. It's as much my fault as anybody else's.
And still another reason is because I value what readers think and how a reader looks at Story.
At the recent SCBWI, I heard one writer described as a writer's writer. That's really quite a mantle to bestow upon a writer.
Then I got to thinking: which would I prefer? Being a writer's writer or a reader's writer. Actually, somewhere in between would be the best place to be on the bookshelves.
The Twilight Saga is an extremely successful series with Readers despite that many Writers find much fault in the technicalities of the stories themselves; whereas, the Harry Potter series is mega-successful because it is able to run the entire spectrum of Reader-and-Writer approval and appeal to all sensibilities.
(To be honest, I really don't care which direction NEVЯLAND takes as long as the books are flying off the shelves and through the checkout line and/or being downloaded to many, many Kindles, iPads, and Sony E-readers!)
I'm inviting you not just to watch Story in the form of NEVЯLAND being created but to be an active participant--and I want to know what you think, generate ideas about the characters, setting, themes, and be an active participant in the evolution of a story--whether you're a Reader only or Writer-Reader.
The 19th Century Writers such as Dickens and Poe did this to a certain extent, often revising their novels, stories, and poems based on initial reader reaction.
Feedback is welcomed, encouraged, and expected--even about the typos!
NEVЯLAND Excerpts: An Experiment in Craziness
See you on the bookshelves.
Be well!
Larry Mike
12 June 2010
The Conversation of Books over Time
I never heard the expression "the conversation of books over time" until my virtual friend Cynthia Leitich Smith introduced me to the phrase.
I had written to ask her if she would participate in an online conversation/interview with our newly formed Shortgrass Children & Young Adults Writers group and also to tell her about my latest project, NEVЯLAND.
She accepted the invitation, but she also noted that my project NEVЯLAND sounded like a couple of other books.
Normally, this wouldn't have bothered me: I know that the concept of "original" ideas is a faulty concept.
But, still, the idea of NEVЯLAND seemed so fresh and novel to me that I had it in my head that absolutely no one had come up with such a unique idea.
Then Cynthia guides to me to a couple of books written years ago that are similar to mine.
I was quite saddened, indeed, even crestfallen.
I had ensnared myself in my own self-made trap of ego and self-importance and made the blatant assumption that a story about the disappearance of adults as happens in NEVЯLAND was mine and mine alone.
Within minutes, I set my mind on dropping the project entirely and resume my YA dragon fantasy (which I had stopped because NEVЯLAND seemed so innovative and refreshing).
I became angry. I became depressed. I sat down with my wife and had a conversation about continuing or stopping the project all together--voiced in all the seriousness as one would if talking about getting a divorce.
I had known from the beginning that my idea for NEVЯLAND was not entirely original: Lord of the Flies, Home Alone, Peter Pan, and many other works had explored the idea of a world where Children are left on their own without the supervision and restrictions of adults.
However, NEVЯLAND was a fresh, bold look at this idea. The idea had gripped me like a long-lost lover, and the thought of letting go was devastating to me.
All because Cynthia told me about two other books she had read. I looked up the two books Cynthia had referenced. Egad. She was right.
Then as I read the synopses and even the first chapters of the books, I began to realize that NEVЯLAND, while similar, was quite different in conception and execution.
NEVЯLAND still had life.
I feverishly rewrote the first chapter--which had been written in third person from Laynie's point of view--to make it better and more unique than the two examples I had just read.
Now NEVЯLAND would be told in first person by Laynie.
Suddenly, new life was breathed into the story and the original flame and passion I had felt as I outlined the first book of NEVЯLAND engulfed me once again.
Then I got a very kind and needed note from Cynthia:
I had written to ask her if she would participate in an online conversation/interview with our newly formed Shortgrass Children & Young Adults Writers group and also to tell her about my latest project, NEVЯLAND.She accepted the invitation, but she also noted that my project NEVЯLAND sounded like a couple of other books.
Normally, this wouldn't have bothered me: I know that the concept of "original" ideas is a faulty concept.
But, still, the idea of NEVЯLAND seemed so fresh and novel to me that I had it in my head that absolutely no one had come up with such a unique idea.
Then Cynthia guides to me to a couple of books written years ago that are similar to mine.
I was quite saddened, indeed, even crestfallen.
I had ensnared myself in my own self-made trap of ego and self-importance and made the blatant assumption that a story about the disappearance of adults as happens in NEVЯLAND was mine and mine alone.
Within minutes, I set my mind on dropping the project entirely and resume my YA dragon fantasy (which I had stopped because NEVЯLAND seemed so innovative and refreshing).
I became angry. I became depressed. I sat down with my wife and had a conversation about continuing or stopping the project all together--voiced in all the seriousness as one would if talking about getting a divorce.
I had known from the beginning that my idea for NEVЯLAND was not entirely original: Lord of the Flies, Home Alone, Peter Pan, and many other works had explored the idea of a world where Children are left on their own without the supervision and restrictions of adults.
However, NEVЯLAND was a fresh, bold look at this idea. The idea had gripped me like a long-lost lover, and the thought of letting go was devastating to me.
All because Cynthia told me about two other books she had read. I looked up the two books Cynthia had referenced. Egad. She was right.
Then as I read the synopses and even the first chapters of the books, I began to realize that NEVЯLAND, while similar, was quite different in conception and execution.
NEVЯLAND still had life.
I feverishly rewrote the first chapter--which had been written in third person from Laynie's point of view--to make it better and more unique than the two examples I had just read.
Now NEVЯLAND would be told in first person by Laynie.
Suddenly, new life was breathed into the story and the original flame and passion I had felt as I outlined the first book of NEVЯLAND engulfed me once again.
Then I got a very kind and needed note from Cynthia:
There's something called "the conversation of books over time." People make this huge deal out of ideas that are "totally original" and there really is no such thing. It's about what you bring to the circle of storytellers, stretching back to the first fires. Hm, that's sounds awfully poetic, but you see my point. If there was a wholly original story, NYC publishing would have no idea what to do with it, there would be no market, and people would probably remark on the author's stability/sanity.
I've never had Cynthia as a writing teacher, but as a virtual friend, she has been inspiring, caring, and motherly.
I met Peter S. Beagle in the fall of 2009, and he related the story how he felt parts of his best-seller and classic The Last Unicorn had plagiarized The Circus of Dr. Lao by Charles G. Finney, which Peter had read as a child.
After The Last Unicorn was published and Peter realized the similarities between parts of his book and Finney's book, he wrote to Finney, telling him he wasn't trying to plagiarize Dr. Lao.
Finney wrote back to tell Peter that he was amused and told Peter not to worry about it, this happens quite a bit to writers.
Even Cynthia said she had a similar experience with her first novel:
I met Peter S. Beagle in the fall of 2009, and he related the story how he felt parts of his best-seller and classic The Last Unicorn had plagiarized The Circus of Dr. Lao by Charles G. Finney, which Peter had read as a child.
After The Last Unicorn was published and Peter realized the similarities between parts of his book and Finney's book, he wrote to Finney, telling him he wasn't trying to plagiarize Dr. Lao.
Finney wrote back to tell Peter that he was amused and told Peter not to worry about it, this happens quite a bit to writers.
Even Cynthia said she had a similar experience with her first novel:
The year my first novel, RAIN IS NOT MY INDIAN NAME came out (and was in ARC), Carol Lynch Williams released CAROLINA AUTUMN. Both books are about girls who're photographers, healing after the death of a loved one (best friend/sister) and each chapter opens with a journey entry. The novels have a LOT of similar elements. But the executions are different. You know who noticed? Me and Carol.
Just recently, a NEVЯLANDer (those who are members of the NEVЯLAND Facebook Group page) said that NEVЯLAND had the same elements as a book called The Girl Who Owned a City published in the 1970s--another book with a similar story line I had never heard about.
This time, I just laughed.
Creative minds really do think alike, and story-tellers have been telling the same eight or nine stories since that first campfire.
As Cynthia so aptly and soothingly put it, it's what the story-teller brings to the campfire that's sets his/her story apart from the other, not the parts of the story.
After all, how many vampire stories have been told since Dracula or flesh-eating zombie movies been made since Night of the Living Dead or dystopia novels since We, Nineteen-Eighty Four, and Anthem?
From this point on I promise myself not to worry about originality of story but concentrate on originality of voice and bringing a different set of eyes to the campfire to awe those sitting around the embers.
See you on the bookshelves.
Larry Mike
This time, I just laughed.
Creative minds really do think alike, and story-tellers have been telling the same eight or nine stories since that first campfire.
After all, how many vampire stories have been told since Dracula or flesh-eating zombie movies been made since Night of the Living Dead or dystopia novels since We, Nineteen-Eighty Four, and Anthem?
From this point on I promise myself not to worry about originality of story but concentrate on originality of voice and bringing a different set of eyes to the campfire to awe those sitting around the embers.
See you on the bookshelves.
Larry Mike
PS: The very, very first story I ever wrote was a "novel" of ten pages when I was 9. It was about a t-rex that washes up on a beach and it spits radio-active fire and about the scientist named Mike who saves the world by killing this dinosaur. I had just seen Godzilla on the local Chiller horror show the week before. At that time, I didn't care that my story was similar to Godzilla--I just wanted to tell one hell-uv-a good story. And I've come full circle now.
02 June 2010
God? Virus? Barney? -- Using Real People to Create Fictional Characters
One of my more inspirational--some say insane --ideas in promoting NEVЯLAND is the weekly "publication" of the Junebug Journal.
I have to be careful, though, not to make the weekly newspaper look too professional. After all in the apocalyptic, non-adult world of NEVЯLAND, the Junebug Journal is published by Chad Chapman, Jr., the 17-year-old son of the disappeared publisher and editor Chad Chapman, Sr.
The weekly newspaper gives a real-world effect to my tale. It reveals background and sundry information about the characters, Junebug, Oklahoma, and gives a different personal insight into the terror and chaos the children are facing.
The newspaper contains some clues and teasers. This second special edition even has an ad for a tattoo parlor--after all, the paper has to pay for itself.
The newspaper allows an outlet for the minor characters, those who don't have a big role in the novel.
Another thing I did to try to achieve a more realistic effect as well as create a more realistic set of characters in a realistic world is to poll several dozen children from 11 through 14-years-old.
Two Altus Public School teachers graciously volunteered to pass out a survey I had written and have their students complete it.
The survey asked things such as age, size of family, if any new CPR and other first aid.
I also asked them a series of questions:
*What do you think happened to the adults?
*Who would you miss most if your family suddenly disappeared?
*What are the five to six biggest problems in a city where there are only Children and no Adults?
*What do you fear the most in such a situation?
*How would you solve some of the problems you think would arise in such a situation?
*Et cetera
I received some very interesting answers. Some were quite insightful.
I was surprised at a few students whose answers came very, very close to the overall plot of NEVЯLAND.
I was pleased as the answers of the students re-affirmed what I had felt as I outlined and began writing the first draft. In other words, I am on the right track.
So, I have combined the Jungebug Journal with the students' survey answers.
Combining the two has given the story an authentic voice and is helping me to stay focused on the real characters. These are real voices from real children, and now they are a part of my tale.
The latest edition of the Junebug Journal contains direct quotes from the surveys of the students--and, yes, one really did say that Barney had eaten the adults. I laughed when I read his response--that young man isn't going to be phased by anything or take much too seriously.
Further editions of the Junebug Journal will feature more real quotes from real students who have now been incorporated into NEVЯLAND.
When you write, don't isolate yourself.
Talk to people who are representative of your characters--in age, gender, appearance, disposition.
Ask these people how they would react in such-and-such situation. You don't' have to tell them you're writing a story, just bring the conflict randomly in conversation or relate it to something you've read in the news or on the Internet.
When you write, create a real fictional world complete with a newspaper, a radio station, local teen hangout. Invite your readers to participate in this real fictional world.
Creating a real world within your fictional world requires getting butt off chair and meeting face-to-face with real people. These real people are your characters, and they will help you to smoothly move your story along.
See you on the bookshelves.
Larry Mike
27 May 2010
Junebug Journal, Special Edition #02 (AR), 13 May 2013
Dear NEVЯLANDers and Those Who are NEVЯLAND Curious:
Chad Chapman, Jr., who took over publication of the Junebug Journal when his father (Chad Chapman, Sr.) disappeared along with the other adults, has announced that Special Edition Issue #02 (AR) will be published this Saturday evening, 29 May 2010--which is Monday, 13 May 2013, in the NEVЯLAND time line.
You'll be able to read the Special Edition Issue #02 (AR) at http://nevrland.info/journal.html
This issue, which is labeled Junebug Journal, Special Edition Issue #02 (AR), will feature interviews with several of the remaining Children--what they think happened, where they think their parents and the other adults went, why only Children 17 and under were left behind, and what they think will happen next.
Click on the image to read the first Special Edition.
Make sure to invite your other Facebook Friends who are not citizens of NEVЯLAND yet to read this very Special Edition.
Some questions will be answered. More questions will arise.
See you on the bookshelves,
Larry Mike
Chad Chapman, Jr., who took over publication of the Junebug Journal when his father (Chad Chapman, Sr.) disappeared along with the other adults, has announced that Special Edition Issue #02 (AR) will be published this Saturday evening, 29 May 2010--which is Monday, 13 May 2013, in the NEVЯLAND time line.
You'll be able to read the Special Edition Issue #02 (AR) at http://nevrland.info/journal.html
This issue, which is labeled Junebug Journal, Special Edition Issue #02 (AR), will feature interviews with several of the remaining Children--what they think happened, where they think their parents and the other adults went, why only Children 17 and under were left behind, and what they think will happen next.
Click on the image to read the first Special Edition.
Make sure to invite your other Facebook Friends who are not citizens of NEVЯLAND yet to read this very Special Edition.
Some questions will be answered. More questions will arise.
See you on the bookshelves,
Larry Mike
24 May 2010
Building My Own Frankenstein
NEVЯLAND has taken on a life of its own. As I progress on this Work-in-Progress, a momentum I hadn't expected has started moving the story forward.
In one week, the NEVЯLAND Facebook Group grew to 266 members. We're now sitting at 271. The goal is to reach 1,000 by August.
To promote a personal interest in the story, I address members as NEVЯLANDers. If fact, the first fifty to join the NEVЯLAND Facebook Group have been given special privileges and deals. I'll offering similar privileges and deals when I reach the first 500.
I've also started publishing the Junebug Journal. Each edition will have news about the children and how they are handling the story. I'll introduce characters, some major, some minor, and some who will appear only in the Journal's weekly articles.
My intent is allow the first readers to be as much a part of the story and the process of writing the tale as the characters are.
Although I know many writing friends who would think my approach is crazy--to put my first drafts out for the world to see in all their naked primordial glory--would be crazy or suicide or both.
One of my writer's superstitions had been keeping my projects Top Secret.
I've changed that.
I've discovered I like to talk out my ideas, to get feedback and reactions, to measure the quality of the tale.
I don't mean that I'm going to apply all the suggestions the first readers send my way--but, feedback is feedback, and I'll glean the constructive ones out of the silly ones.
I'm building my own Frankenstein Creature.
But, unlike poor, stupid Victor, I'm not going to abandon my Creation--my Creation won't become a Daemon.
Rather, I will be the good father and make sure NEVЯLAND is raised as it should be--with discipline, care, and love.
See you on the bookshelves.
Larry Mike
In one week, the NEVЯLAND Facebook Group grew to 266 members. We're now sitting at 271. The goal is to reach 1,000 by August.
To promote a personal interest in the story, I address members as NEVЯLANDers. If fact, the first fifty to join the NEVЯLAND Facebook Group have been given special privileges and deals. I'll offering similar privileges and deals when I reach the first 500.
I've also started publishing the Junebug Journal. Each edition will have news about the children and how they are handling the story. I'll introduce characters, some major, some minor, and some who will appear only in the Journal's weekly articles.
My intent is allow the first readers to be as much a part of the story and the process of writing the tale as the characters are.
Although I know many writing friends who would think my approach is crazy--to put my first drafts out for the world to see in all their naked primordial glory--would be crazy or suicide or both.
One of my writer's superstitions had been keeping my projects Top Secret.
I've changed that.
I've discovered I like to talk out my ideas, to get feedback and reactions, to measure the quality of the tale.
I don't mean that I'm going to apply all the suggestions the first readers send my way--but, feedback is feedback, and I'll glean the constructive ones out of the silly ones.
But, unlike poor, stupid Victor, I'm not going to abandon my Creation--my Creation won't become a Daemon.
Rather, I will be the good father and make sure NEVЯLAND is raised as it should be--with discipline, care, and love.
See you on the bookshelves.
Larry Mike
NEVЯLAND—The Making of Literary Sausage
Dear Curious Reader:
Imagine watching Michelangelo paint the Sistine Chapel, starting with the blank ceiling, adding the outline to the figures of God and Adam at the moment of Human creation, and then as he slowly added hue and texture to each scene until he produced one of the greatest works of art in history—the story of Human creation and even destruction in one tiny space in the Universe.
Imagine listening to the first version of “Please, Please Me”, the Beatles first big hit. I’ve heard it. The original is slow, lumbering through a maudlin strain of boy-loves-girl teenage angst. It wasn’t very good until they sped it up and added tonal color to produce a celebration of boy-girl teenage love.
Or, imagine watching a building go up, from ground breaking through foundation laying to framing, and then finally the building is finished. We’re doing that now at Altus High School as we witness a nearly 80-year-old building being transformed to meet the needs of 21st Century students.
And when the project is done—whether the Sistine Chapel, a great hit song, or a new building—it all looks like magic.
That’s what writing is—hard work that looks like magic in the end. Nathaniel Hawthorne said, “Easy reading is damn hard writing.”
And how many of us have read a good book and said, “That’s easy. I can do that.”
Lebron James makes “easy” clutch shots, eh?
Most readers don’t get the inside look at the making of a novel.
Maybe they shouldn’t. Maybe making a novel, like making sausage, isn’t something people should witness. I love sausage, but I really don’t want to see the butchering, the skinning, the gutting, hack-hack-hacking, and then the squeezing into the casings.
It’s not a pretty sight.
That’s what this is: NEVЯLAND—The Making of Literary Sausage.
I know what you're thinking: Wow! This guy is something else. He's comparing himself to Michelangelo, John Lennon and Paul McCartney, and Frank Lloyd Wright.
No. I'm just using those greats as examples to get your attention, to help those of you who are not writers better understand that no finished work of art or craft comes easily or appears as if by magic, that even the great artists and artisans start from a spark of an idea and go through the phases of butchering, skinning, hack-hack-hacking, and then squeezing into the casing to produce their best work..
Yes, I'm confident in my story—my characters, my plot, my conflicts, my over all scheme—enough so to share it with anyone who wishes to witness the making of NEVЯLAND from the beginning.
And I realize that others look at this confidence as arrogance or even conceit. So be it.
This is new to me, too. I'll stumble in the process. Unlike others, I'm stubborn enough to get up and keep troupering on until I reach the end, one way or another.
Will you like the story? Reading is subjective. Either you will like it or you won't. Or, you'll be stuck between liking and disliking. Maybe you won't like the way it is told. Maybe I use too many adjectives. Maybe I don't use enough adjectives. Maybe I don't show enough or I tell too much. We'll see.
Let me know what you think. You won't hurt my feelings. Well, maybe just a little, but I opened myself up to the slings and arrows.
Even cooks at five-star restaurants have their critics and detractors. I'm no different.
In my previous publications, I've received raves, and I've received rants. It happens. I live with the fact that not everybody will like me, like what I do, like what I create. And this gives me the freedom to go ahead and create freely without the fetters or manacles of popular opinion.
I do welcome feedback—both praise and problems. Something you may not know is that writers don't write in a vacuum. They workshop their tales, letting others read bits and pieces and wholes, receiving feedback, changing and shaping their tales until it's «readable».
While a writer writes first to please himself, he writes secondly (more importantly) to please the reader. A writer without a reader is like an ocean without a shore upon which to crash it's mighty waves majestically.
Here's the link: NEVЯLAND (RAW) Chapter 01
Read well. Read faithfully. Just Read.
Thank you for allowing me into your crowded space of time. I am most grateful and humbled indeed.
See you on the bookshelves.
Larry Mike
Imagine watching Michelangelo paint the Sistine Chapel, starting with the blank ceiling, adding the outline to the figures of God and Adam at the moment of Human creation, and then as he slowly added hue and texture to each scene until he produced one of the greatest works of art in history—the story of Human creation and even destruction in one tiny space in the Universe.
Imagine listening to the first version of “Please, Please Me”, the Beatles first big hit. I’ve heard it. The original is slow, lumbering through a maudlin strain of boy-loves-girl teenage angst. It wasn’t very good until they sped it up and added tonal color to produce a celebration of boy-girl teenage love.
Or, imagine watching a building go up, from ground breaking through foundation laying to framing, and then finally the building is finished. We’re doing that now at Altus High School as we witness a nearly 80-year-old building being transformed to meet the needs of 21st Century students.
And when the project is done—whether the Sistine Chapel, a great hit song, or a new building—it all looks like magic.
That’s what writing is—hard work that looks like magic in the end. Nathaniel Hawthorne said, “Easy reading is damn hard writing.”
And how many of us have read a good book and said, “That’s easy. I can do that.”
Lebron James makes “easy” clutch shots, eh?
Most readers don’t get the inside look at the making of a novel.
Maybe they shouldn’t. Maybe making a novel, like making sausage, isn’t something people should witness. I love sausage, but I really don’t want to see the butchering, the skinning, the gutting, hack-hack-hacking, and then the squeezing into the casings.
It’s not a pretty sight.
That’s what this is: NEVЯLAND—The Making of Literary Sausage.
I know what you're thinking: Wow! This guy is something else. He's comparing himself to Michelangelo, John Lennon and Paul McCartney, and Frank Lloyd Wright.
No. I'm just using those greats as examples to get your attention, to help those of you who are not writers better understand that no finished work of art or craft comes easily or appears as if by magic, that even the great artists and artisans start from a spark of an idea and go through the phases of butchering, skinning, hack-hack-hacking, and then squeezing into the casing to produce their best work..
Yes, I'm confident in my story—my characters, my plot, my conflicts, my over all scheme—enough so to share it with anyone who wishes to witness the making of NEVЯLAND from the beginning.
And I realize that others look at this confidence as arrogance or even conceit. So be it.
This is new to me, too. I'll stumble in the process. Unlike others, I'm stubborn enough to get up and keep troupering on until I reach the end, one way or another.
Will you like the story? Reading is subjective. Either you will like it or you won't. Or, you'll be stuck between liking and disliking. Maybe you won't like the way it is told. Maybe I use too many adjectives. Maybe I don't use enough adjectives. Maybe I don't show enough or I tell too much. We'll see.
Let me know what you think. You won't hurt my feelings. Well, maybe just a little, but I opened myself up to the slings and arrows.
Even cooks at five-star restaurants have their critics and detractors. I'm no different.
In my previous publications, I've received raves, and I've received rants. It happens. I live with the fact that not everybody will like me, like what I do, like what I create. And this gives me the freedom to go ahead and create freely without the fetters or manacles of popular opinion.
I do welcome feedback—both praise and problems. Something you may not know is that writers don't write in a vacuum. They workshop their tales, letting others read bits and pieces and wholes, receiving feedback, changing and shaping their tales until it's «readable».
While a writer writes first to please himself, he writes secondly (more importantly) to please the reader. A writer without a reader is like an ocean without a shore upon which to crash it's mighty waves majestically.
Here's the link: NEVЯLAND (RAW) Chapter 01
Read well. Read faithfully. Just Read.
Thank you for allowing me into your crowded space of time. I am most grateful and humbled indeed.
See you on the bookshelves.
Larry Mike
23 May 2010
Extra! Extra! Read All about It!
The new version of the Junebug Journal is now out--the one announcing the disappearance of all adults over 18 years.
Click on the image to go the Junebug Journal web page.
A new edition will be published each Sunday evening.
Each edition will have news about the Event itself, characters, how the children are handling the situation, and what they think has caused the disappearance.
Each edition will contain clues to the story and provide insights only subscribers to this blog and Facebook Group NEVЯLANDers.
Pictures will also be featured!
Enjoy the newspaper.
Don't forget to join the NEVЯLAND Facebook Group!
Take care,
Larry Mike
A new edition will be published each Sunday evening.
Each edition will have news about the Event itself, characters, how the children are handling the situation, and what they think has caused the disappearance.
Each edition will contain clues to the story and provide insights only subscribers to this blog and Facebook Group NEVЯLANDers.
Pictures will also be featured!
Enjoy the newspaper.
Don't forget to join the NEVЯLAND Facebook Group!
Take care,
Larry Mike
22 May 2010
Busy, Happy Week & New Website
Semester Exams.
Final Grades.
Graduation.
Work in Progress.
Blog.
New Website for NEVЯLAND. Not much, but a beginning.
Facebook.
Twitter.
And, I’ve had a hacking cough for three weeks that sounds like I’m a thirty-year smoker and is keeping me up late at night.
So, today, I’ve worked for several hours, and it’s time to quit.
Wife’s been working on the fixings for the BBQ. She’s got the meat ready.
And now it’s time for me to do some cooking.
Busy.
But relaxed.
And happy with the week’s accomplishments.
My Facebook Group page for NEVЯLAND went from 0 to 266 members in six days.
I'm happy about that.
See you on the bookshelves.
Larry Mike
16 May 2010
NEVЯLAND Soundtrack: AC/DC - Thunderstruck
I'm in one of those moods.
The words are pounding out like thunder and flashing across the page like lightening.
Nothing more thrilling than directed and intense creativity!
The words are pounding out like thunder and flashing across the page like lightening.
Nothing more thrilling than directed and intense creativity!
AC/DC Joins the NEVЯLAND Soundtrack
Another theme song for the NEVЯLAND Soundtrack: AC/DC's "Highway to Hell".
This version features the original AC/DC singer and was one of my favorite headbanging songs way back in 1979--when I was but a lad of 24!
I'm still that lad, and I'm still headbanging--it's cool feeling my brain sloshing against the sides of my skull!
Do you have a suggestion for the NEVЯLAND Soundtrack?
Send it to me.
I've already got "The End" by The Doors along with "Highway to Hell" by AC/DC.
The song doesn't have to be a death song, a metal song, or a headbanger.
Just a song you think would be a part of the NEVЯLAND Soundtrack.
See on the bookshelves--and in the music stores!
Larry Mike
This version features the original AC/DC singer and was one of my favorite headbanging songs way back in 1979--when I was but a lad of 24!
I'm still that lad, and I'm still headbanging--it's cool feeling my brain sloshing against the sides of my skull!
Do you have a suggestion for the NEVЯLAND Soundtrack?
Send it to me.
I've already got "The End" by The Doors along with "Highway to Hell" by AC/DC.
The song doesn't have to be a death song, a metal song, or a headbanger.
Just a song you think would be a part of the NEVЯLAND Soundtrack.
See on the bookshelves--and in the music stores!
Larry Mike
15 May 2010
NEVЯLAND--The Contest
Everyone loves a winner, and everyone loves to win!
To promote NEVЯLAND--The Novel WIP, I'm having a series of contests.
Here's the first contest I'm having:
You'll have to keep track of which of your FB Friends join The Group or The Blog and send me their names when you reach ten.
When you notice that ten of your Facebook Friends have joined The Blog or The Group, email me with their names, and I'll confirm you as a winner.
Check back often for updates for other NEVЯLAND--The Novel WIP Contests!
See you on the bookshelves.
Larry Mike Garmon
To promote NEVЯLAND--The Novel WIP, I'm having a series of contests.
Here's the first contest I'm having:
The first person to refer ten of his/her Facebook friends to NEVЯLAND--The (WordPress) Blog or NEVЯLAND--The (Facebook) Group will get a signed hardcopy of the first draft of NEVЯLAND--The Novel WIP!
When you notice that ten of your Facebook Friends have joined The Blog or The Group, email me with their names, and I'll confirm you as a winner.
Check back often for updates for other NEVЯLAND--The Novel WIP Contests!
See you on the bookshelves.
Larry Mike Garmon
Labels:
apocalyptic,
neverland,
self-promotion,
writing contest
13 May 2010
And All the Children Are Insane
I'm at a point in the opening of NEVЯLAND where hysteria and chaos have consumed the children like a fire gorging on dry grass.
To help with the mood, I'm listening to songs with themes of destruction, apocalypse, death, and end-of-the-world themes.
And the best of these death/apocalyptic songs is "The End" by The Doors--
"And all the children are insane
All the children are insane."
Enjoy the video and the song.
See you on the bookshelves.
Larry Mike Garmon
To help with the mood, I'm listening to songs with themes of destruction, apocalypse, death, and end-of-the-world themes.
And the best of these death/apocalyptic songs is "The End" by The Doors--
"And all the children are insane
All the children are insane."
Enjoy the video and the song.
See you on the bookshelves.
Larry Mike Garmon
Labels:
apocalypse now,
apocalyptic,
death songs,
neverland,
post-apocalyptic,
the doors,
the end,
vietnam
08 May 2010
A Rose by Any Other Name Still Gets the Blame for the Thorns
"The Naming of Cats" is an excellent poem by T.S. Eliot. If you haven't read it, you must be culturally depraved indeed.
Names are more important to an author than a parent. I know that sounds odd, but it's true.
As an author, I fret over a name for a character.
My own children's names came quite easily.
As a story begins to tell itself to me, a character often tells me his/her name right away.
Sometimes, though, I've got to use a descriptive name as the fabulists of old did because the character is either too shy to tell me his/her name or is being a bit of a prankster and making me guess his/her name or wait until I'm well into the story to tell me his/her name.
As a teacher, I have nearly 3,000 names of former students from which to choose. Because my YA characters are amalgams of my students, a character name pops to mind as I remember a former student who is much like the character in the story, and so the name sticks.
In NEVЯLAND, the protagonist's name has changed twice.
First, I thought she said her name was Rianne Pfaltzgraft. I had a seventh grade student many, many years ago named Rianne Pfaltzgraft, and I've always wanted to use that name in a tale.
As I began to outline and then write, the girl aged from 12 to 13 and she told me "Rianne Pfalzgraft" wasn't her name at all. She was just using that until I begin to listen.
To tell you the truth, I still wasn't listening well enough, and I didn't catch the second incarnation of the character's name and I don't remember it now.
Finally, she shouted the name out to me: Laynie.
I have a student graduating this year named Laynie, and as the character developed, I realized how much much the protagonist of NEVЯLAND and Laynie were twins--not so much in appearance but in attitude and temperment.
Interesting, Laynie (the character, not the real student) still looks an awful lot like Rianne, which is probably why I was confused as to her name in the beginning.
Once I had Laynie's name, her friends' names came next and came quickly: Lauryn, Ravyn, Cynthea, and Kymber. These are actual names of students I know.
There's a clique nickname in that group of "Y" girls.
Until Lauryn told me her name, I had to call her Snobby in the outline. At 13, she already is a multi-beauty pageant winner and is quite vain and, well, snobby. Her brother is referred to as Snobby's Brother, or SB for short.
The eighth grade boy Laynie is interested in is just called Jock (he plays football and runs track) while the geek who is interested in Laynie is called Nerd Boy because he is, well, a geek and a nerd.
I know both of these boys will eventually reveal to me their names, hopefully by the time I submit the manuscript in August!
For name inspiration, I also like to scan baby name lists on the Internet.
However, the best is the SSN most popular names over the past one hundred years. Here's the LINK.
Character names are important. It's hard to image the protagonist of Catcher in the Rye being named Mike Smith instead of Holden Caufield.
And imagine the lost symbolism in Death of a Salesman if Willie Loman's name was Sam Steward.
See you the bookshelves.
Larry Mike Garmon
Names are more important to an author than a parent. I know that sounds odd, but it's true.
As an author, I fret over a name for a character.
My own children's names came quite easily.
As a story begins to tell itself to me, a character often tells me his/her name right away.
Sometimes, though, I've got to use a descriptive name as the fabulists of old did because the character is either too shy to tell me his/her name or is being a bit of a prankster and making me guess his/her name or wait until I'm well into the story to tell me his/her name.
As a teacher, I have nearly 3,000 names of former students from which to choose. Because my YA characters are amalgams of my students, a character name pops to mind as I remember a former student who is much like the character in the story, and so the name sticks.
In NEVЯLAND, the protagonist's name has changed twice.
First, I thought she said her name was Rianne Pfaltzgraft. I had a seventh grade student many, many years ago named Rianne Pfaltzgraft, and I've always wanted to use that name in a tale.
As I began to outline and then write, the girl aged from 12 to 13 and she told me "Rianne Pfalzgraft" wasn't her name at all. She was just using that until I begin to listen.
To tell you the truth, I still wasn't listening well enough, and I didn't catch the second incarnation of the character's name and I don't remember it now.
Finally, she shouted the name out to me: Laynie.
I have a student graduating this year named Laynie, and as the character developed, I realized how much much the protagonist of NEVЯLAND and Laynie were twins--not so much in appearance but in attitude and temperment.
Interesting, Laynie (the character, not the real student) still looks an awful lot like Rianne, which is probably why I was confused as to her name in the beginning.
Once I had Laynie's name, her friends' names came next and came quickly: Lauryn, Ravyn, Cynthea, and Kymber. These are actual names of students I know.
There's a clique nickname in that group of "Y" girls.
Until Lauryn told me her name, I had to call her Snobby in the outline. At 13, she already is a multi-beauty pageant winner and is quite vain and, well, snobby. Her brother is referred to as Snobby's Brother, or SB for short.
The eighth grade boy Laynie is interested in is just called Jock (he plays football and runs track) while the geek who is interested in Laynie is called Nerd Boy because he is, well, a geek and a nerd.
I know both of these boys will eventually reveal to me their names, hopefully by the time I submit the manuscript in August!
For name inspiration, I also like to scan baby name lists on the Internet.
However, the best is the SSN most popular names over the past one hundred years. Here's the LINK.
Character names are important. It's hard to image the protagonist of Catcher in the Rye being named Mike Smith instead of Holden Caufield.
And imagine the lost symbolism in Death of a Salesman if Willie Loman's name was Sam Steward.
See you the bookshelves.
Larry Mike Garmon
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